Objective: Students will bring in photographs from their personal lives and write a poem about it, or write about a photograph they wish they had, and why.

Materials: Photographs supplied by students and teacher, Writing supplies, Poem on overhead transparency (Encarta)

Visual Resources: Photographs, Poems

Procedure:

I have a photograph of my mother

lying beneath her. She is facing

the sun. Her white suit coat is open

and flaps in the wind, filling

the space between her raised arms

and her body like the wings of an angel.

Her hair is shimmering, one blond hunk

of it flying skyward. Her thin hand is

a shadowed awning above her eyes

and she stands straight: a tall

golden stalk in a growing field.

Today she called from Florida

voice slurred, spilling commands

that I tell her about my separation,

my job, my life. Threatening, between

bouts of coughing, to fly here in

just two hours. And I could see her,

hunched over the phone, dried up and

shrinking like a root torn from the earth

and long forgotten. And when I said "No"

and then "Good bye," I knew that I would look

for her photograph to remind me to be gentle

to this person who once stood on the edge of life

and soared ahead faithfully to meet it.

1. Next students write their own poem about a photograph they treasure or one they wish they had. Students need at least 20 – 25 minutes to write.
2. When done, students may share with the class if they wish.

Assessment: Based on formally assessing "voice" in poetic writing.

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